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The feedback I was given was very helpful. I used the feedback given to improve my script. One of the improvements I made was my numerous amounts of format errors. With the feedback I was really able to understand how to format my script correctly. Alternatively, I had made some simply mistakes, such as not using the correct punctuation at times. Therefore, I fixed those small errors. Also, quite a few times throughout the script, some of the dialogue just didn't seem realistic to how that type of character would act in the real world. After reading this bit of feedback, I went through my entire script again and read it as if I was about to act that scene. Therefore, I understood how it didn't make sense and fixed the dialogue. Finally, the feedback made me realise that one of the characters's storylines in the script didn't make any sense. This made me rethink their storyline and made it work with the rest of the script.